Welcome to the forum Jessie! Looks like you have done a pretty nice job, its a lot harder doing cement print then it looks hey! The VIII toebox is my fav part of the shoe.
Just a few general things i watched your video it appears you paint right out of the bottle with the Angelus do you put the duller into the bottles first? Your shoes don't look too shiny so I assume you do. Otherwise your photos look a lot like mine used to I would suggest maybe doing side lateral views of each shoe, you don't have to have both sneakers in each shot sometimes its just too clutered and can result in the pictures being a little unfocused, if your in photoshop try auto contrast and auto color to white balance them out a bit as well.
Just general tips hope it doesn't come off rude just trying to help out. Welcome to the forums hope you like it here!
PS: Checked your site, Toy Story af1 lows are nice! Good job on the text.
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